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I feel my heart, its close
Close to breaking

Hard,

On the outside, you’d never know

Die,

My wish for you
My wish that damns me to my place

Hell,

Where we both will go
Me for wishing, you for taking

Time,

Ever taking and taking

Life,

I only have so much..... soon, gone
Unburdened, free , my life forever what I wanted it to be
As for the heart, I feel it so near
Neck, wrist, head, ear,

Pounding ,

With what I cant contain, will contain, have to. Not for me , but I can and will.

BREAK,

Ha, wouldn’t you be sorry, even surprise flash in your eyes.

Unrestrained, unadulterated, pure
All these things described my rage

Hopeful, wishing, mindful
All the things you must never hear

Watching you I will always be, one and only, forever, with me.
©2008-2009 ~Janel1707
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morbid much

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:iconkurwa-zajebista:
..i dont say this often, but...wow.
i felt that.
thats....thats just.......
good job.
put most of my other favourites to shame.

i hope you feel better.
if you want, try thinking about how every bad moment/situation/thing will be balanced out with good ones.
might sound like crap, but it works for me
...
...yeah nevermind. hope your ok. :hug:

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All was good and nothing hurt.
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